Some Poems

Discussion in 'Literature and Poetry' started by Diosadentro, Feb 7, 2009.

  1. Some Poems

    These are just a few poems I wrote that I would like to share with you. They all hold a special meaning to me, they talk of some of my struggles with lust issues and things that I try not to keep hidden. I do believe God wants us to talk about our struggles and praises so we can raise each other up and help our brothers and sisters in need. I know many people go through the same issues I have. Not only I have struggles, not just with lust but with all sin, the things we think about people all the time, the things we think or doing.. All these things are not healthy to keep stuck inside, constantly with our minds fixed on them. We should share our struggles, share our pain, and share our guilt, because when we open up and let this balloon of emotion pop, we can confess it to our friends, peers, and our God. We can seek help and not be alone, because together we are one body of Christ, strong in him and building each other up, because we were not meant to do anything alone, which is why we have a God that helps and cares for us, so we should help and care for each other too, because we are strong together. Anyway:


    The dark is where the trouble lays
    The things we don't say led our lives
    For when the wounded stay silent in their ways
    There's no chance that they'll survive

    We think what we do can stay unsaid
    That if it is not known, we can find peace
    But though you don't say it, it's still in your head
    And if it's not questioned, you'll never be free

    For satan is saying, "It's really not bad"
    But Christ is saying it's wrong
    And when we ignore our struggles deep in our head
    We find it hard to move along

    No matter if it's small or if it is large
    The truth is it's all still sin
    And that 3 letter word, so full of evil
    Can crack and destroy a person from within

    So speak up, all you people
    All of us go through this too
    You are not as alone as you do believe
    For sin is in all, not just a few

    There is hope to the hopeless
    We are here to hear your cries
    For the bible says to carry each others burdens
    And in this way, you will fulfill the law of Christ.
    (Galatians 6:1-2)

  2. Sinless Gold

    A man walks into the new world bank
    He wears a black suit and tie
    And as he walks his pockets rattle
    Telling of the coins inside

    "I would like to make a large deposit"
    A grin speaks to the teller
    "One thousand souls move in my pocket"
    "To empty would feel much better"

    "Would you like to see your receipt?"
    The employee asks the person
    "No that's alright, I'm always counting"
    "and not a soul I'm missin"

    "Well sir I'm seeing your down a lot"
    "A withdraw of billions yesterday"
    "no that's wrong, what has happened"
    "This has to be a big mistake!"

    "Well sir the name is here you see"
    "A signature made by Jesus Christ"
    "It says your accounts are bound to him"
    "I'm not quite sure why your surprised"

    "Surprised you say, or course I am"
    "But.. But sir the money's his"
    "The account was made in his name"
    "For as long as he does live."

    "Live you say, is that all"
    "I know of what to do"
    "I'll find a cross and 3 old nails"
    "and make a stunning view"

    So with that the devil took out coins,
    he had a plan you see
    He threw the coins out on the table
    And etched in Pharisee

    And with that the plan, was all set
    the traps were all in motion
    He tempted Jesus to see where he stood,
    Checking his devotion

    He said, "Just jump, you won't fall"
    But Jesus knew where he stood
    He pushed that devil away from him
    and said Your gold is gone for good.

    But the devil just grinned and didn't see
    The enormous size of his arrogance
    For on that day that Jesus died
    he was left holding not a cent

    For Jesus never really died
    He simply just rose again
    And he took that Gold and made it pure
    Fully without sin

    He paved the street of his new home
    With the sinless Gold that shined
    And then looked on down at that devil there
    and said, "All is mine!"
  3. Are these your first poems?

    They are not bad and scripturally very sound, but I miss some application of good technique. I'd recommend to read some other poems to get you a better feel for words.

    But I don't mean to only critique. The poems are really good for your first tries.
  4. Poems every body, Poems

    The bible says

    Eph 5:19 Speaking to yourselves in psalms and hymns and spiritual songs, singing and making melody in your heart to the Lord;


    Eph 5:18 And be not drunk with wine, wherein is excess; but be filled with the Spirit;


    Rom 8:2 For the law of the Spirit of life in Christ Jesus hath made me free from the law of sin and death.

    Now if every believer would sing out to God, Give a poem, give a melody to keep victory in mind.

    Jesus Is Lord.

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