My Poetry

Discussion in 'Literature and Poetry' started by shill, Oct 16, 2009.

  1. My Poetry

    I have decided to start sharing some of my poetry. This was the last poem that I wrote about a year ago.

    New Vow!

    by Shaun Patrick Hill

    As I walk through this life, every step that I make,
    I get closer to you God, showing you in my wake!
    Thanks for the blessing, I do not deserve.
    My alliance with you, I want to preserve.
    Every heart that I've broken, All the lies I have spoken,
    I give them to you now, As I make this new vow!
    With all of the strength in me, Lord
    I will praise your name with every note and chord.
    I will read your word, listen, and obey.
    And with your help it will be harder to stray.
    I will try to become the man I should be.
    My heart, to You, I will give the master key!
  2. Very nice Shill

    Thank you for sharing. I pray you will start sharing more with us.

    God bless,

  3. Beautiful, just beautiful Shill. It's obvious the Lord has blessed you with a gift of writing. Please share more with us and thank you for sharing this one.

    Blessings, Cheri
  4. Very nice..I love most all kinds of poetry..keep em' coming.
  5. Thank you for sharing with us, very beautiful
  6. Thank you all for your wonderful comments. Here is another one that I wrote awhile back. I didn't know if I should post it in a new thread or not.

    The Haunting Past

    by Shaun Patrick Hill

    Why does the past haunt me so?
    Why can't I just let it all go?
    Wherever I turn it always is there...
    I look in the mirror, back at me it stares.
    Why should I care? I've changed since then.
    But it's stuck in my head, as if written in pen.
    I've tried to erase it, but it keeps coming back,
    But each time it fades, to a lighter shade of black.
    My only hope is that someday it will move on,
    And be only a shadow, or all the way gone.
    So I pray this to you, great God up above,
    Please take this away, to make more room for love.

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