Looks like your phone's spell checker took a holiday lol.Anoujrt great meddsge
Fair ‘nuff…Interesting read - but please don't leave me there.
Sorry I missed the 'please don't leave me there' part.Appreciate that - your followup - although my comment was simple rhetoric.
I'm on a different page when it comes to the original sin and the fig leaves.
But I appreciate the way you put things together.
Interesting read - but please don't leave me there.
Appreciate that - your followup - although my comment was simple rhetoric.
I'm on a different page when it comes to the original sin and the fig leaves.
But I appreciate the way you put things together.
Sorry I missed the 'please don't leave me there' part.
Very 'punny'.
Bob, "Please don't leave me there" = fig leaves = very punny (rhymes with funny).Ok, 2404 and crossnote;
"don't leave me there," "rhetoric," "Very punny" What?
I'm a little lost and don't get it.
Peace!
Hello BobOk, 2404 and crossnote;
"don't leave me there," "rhetoric," "Very punny" What?
I'm a little lost and don't get it.
Peace!
I’m glad I am not alone…Ok, 2404 and crossnote;
"don't leave me there," "rhetoric," "Very punny" What?
I'm a little lost and don't get it.
Peace!
Via, Post #10 helped, no? If not, I'll be 'leaving'.I’m glad I am not alone…
Nice insight CP. That's a big reason l hardly read the poems of others.I've found poetry fascinating at times and at other times highly obscure. The author often has a clear meaning and intention, but that meaning doesn't always translate well. Sometimes though poetry adds color and imagery that does make a subject more clear and interesting.
IMO we all start with our own understanding, a poem walks us through the poet's imagery of their understanding of the concept. If our understanding to start out with is different or we have trouble following the imagery we can get lost or find different conclusions from the same poem.
Just my 2 cents worth, perhaps 1 cent thought.
Sorry Via, I don't use too much imagery, I tend to be heavier on the metaphors.some poems are like jigsaws to me. if the imagery is good I get it instantly, but then if they have a deeper meaning, a spiritual truth, I suck at finding it lol
the only time I really came up with something good ( when a poet said my poem was outstanding that I submitted) was when I wasn't really trying.
it took 2 minutes to do and it just flowed out. I think my whole being just happened to all be in sync together in the right place at the right time,I have never done it since. but I admire those who can write poems especially free flow.
Hello Bob
I think Crossnote's poetry is pretty good - thought provoking.
In my replies, probably not much to get.
I would be interested to hear your take on the poem.