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Old 05-06-2007, 12:22 AM   #1
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a blank stare on my face as i sit and stare into space, my mind feels like a waste of space sitting in my skull, the money i've chased, the miles ive paced seem like nothing when im staring into your face. blood on my knuckles, blood on my knees, probably from crawling around begging you please, ive turned to you for the devil had nothing new. the lives youve took and the lies youve spoke, have me in rage ready to engage in spiritual warfare. afew more years and ill be in place no longer staring into this emptey space.

this is a poem i wrote. its just about me turning to christianity, if you want i can break it down for you, ive been told my poems are hard to inerpret
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"come into my world and you can see that we are more than thugs"
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Old 05-06-2007, 12:32 PM   #2
 
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Daniel - Thank you for posting it. I'm certain that everyone that has chatted with you in posts and replies knows what these words mean and we are truly proud of you for being able to put your past behind you and for you to find Christ.

Blessings to you, brother...
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Old 05-06-2007, 05:35 PM   #3
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thanks, i like poetry
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"im running and doging caps till the day i see jehova"

"only time will tell who dies, these are the day's of our lives"

"come into my world and you can see that we are more than thugs"
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Very interesting brother - most of my poems start with roses are red violets are blue
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Old 05-13-2007, 05:16 AM   #5
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At first glance it isn't always so easy to understand. But for those who care will search through the depth of things. Every person is an individual and has their own life story. I wasn't their while you endured such a journey. But I have a journey of my own. So I can relate to you Daniel. Nobody has to go through anything alone. As brothers and sisters in Christ, we are all one family. I'd be very happy if you would open up a little more. I promise to listen with diligence. As I said looking at this for the first time I may not completely understand. But I WANT to understand. And I care enough to listen.

God Bless You!

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God has given you much love Mary17- that is a very special gift and the more you use it the more it will grow.
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Daniel, I didn't find this hard to interpret at all and I think the feelings you put into words are beautiful~
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