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Old 04-11-2008, 11:16 PM   #6
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Originally Posted by violet View Post
Alright, my dear girl.
God has blessed you.
I think you should collect your poetry and pictures and make a book!



You think so? I'll have to save every poem that I have and do put it in a book with all my pics.

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Originally Posted by ExCordeChristi View Post
I liked the color descriptions in this poem. It made it more alive and vivid.
Your welcome! I like to give vivid descriptions. It's what makes writing more interesting to read.
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Hebrews 4:12 (New Living Translation [NLT])
12 For the word of God is alive and powerful. It is sharper than the sharpest two-edged sword, cutting between soul and spirit, between joint and marrow. It exposes our innermost thoughts and desires.

He Came To Demonstrate I Am For You,
Not Against You.
Romans 8:31

Last edited by NearertoGod; 04-11-2008 at 11:17 PM. Reason: I had to remove a "U" and put an "I" there instead
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