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Fluffy · 03-06-2008, 07:22 PM

(Whirlwind, it is YOU that has the gift! I wish I could write like you do. But you know, each to his own gift, huh? We each write in our own style that God has given us. Hey! I like your style!)

Gazing around in wonder, Dolly held tight to Ranwell's hand.
Meet who? She wondered. Could it be....? She didnt dare formulate that thought. No way. Could it be....?
Light was all around, everywhere. Filling everything, every corner of her being.
"You'd better drink some of this." Ranwell handed Dolly a beautiful flask of gleaming silver.
Without questioning, she drank deeply of a clear, cool something. It was more than water. It felt alive, yet refreshing.
"What is this?" She asked after wiping her mouth.
"Dont you know?" Ranwell smiled gently. He took the flask back and continued leading the way.
Energy surged thru her body and she felt light as a feather. Dolly felt like she could run for ages without stopping!
She couldnt see any other people, but it felt crowded. The floor turned from grey stone to a crystal clear tile. It looked like she could see straight thru to miles and miles of crystal. Tripping over her feet, Dolly couldnt help but stare in wonder at the floor.
BOOM!
Thunder pealed. It was answered by another. It rolled and rolled.
BOOM!
Again!
There was a doorway ahead.
Suddenly, Dolly was afraid.
"Do you need another drink?" Ranwell asked solicitously.
"No, no. Well, maybe just a sip." She really didnt need it, but it tasted so good! And besides, it was an excuse to pause a moment before going thru the door.
Where was Bill? Was he going thru a door, too?
BOOM!
"What is that?" Dolly asked Ranwell.
"You'll see."
Dolly looked up at him sceptically. Wait a minute. Where were his glasses?
"You've got me this far, I'll trust you farther." The words were out before she could pull them back in. But why not? They were true!
BOOM!
They went in.

(Your turn!)